Mock-ups

Here are two pages from the mock-up I am doing for my story of Lou, a boy who daydreams of walking in the grass late at night but never does and instead waits until he is a middle aged guy whose life has past him by and where he finally realizes that he can't think of anymore excuses not to act on this daydreamed impulse, so he finally does.
I have completed the writing and storyboard for this short story and am now working on the dummy for it.
I am also currently working on the storyboard for Jack, and have assembled a dummy to start working on for this story as well.